Tuesday, April 7, 2015
COOL
People recognized as cool never try to be cool we just are. Cool is effortless. Therefore when I see others trying to be cool they just look like attention seekers. Making an effort to be cool is not cool and only doing it for appreciation or acceptance from someone else is even worse. These are the people who show up early but wait outside to be noticed, these are the people who only converse about where they shop and how expensive their possessions are.On the other hand, there are those of us who genuinely and effortlessly cool. We don't brag or show off, we don't even try to be cool but it seems we are always in the right places at the right times. We get noticed for the little things. We let our differences shine through and we aren't afraid to be ourselves and have our own opinions. Whats cool to us may not be to others but this doesn't change our minds.Everyone is cool in there own ways and cool is not universal. Everyone has their own idea of cool.
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I agree how we can be cool in our own way. Everyone react different when they try to be cool, others are cool in their own way
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ReplyDeleteI disagree with a little of your paragraph about attention seekers as they are at times depicted in society as cool people such as: Rappers who always try to be in the spotlight, some wealthy people, that girl or boy that is considered as a jock in high school, but this is your opinion and I agree with most of it. For most people considered as cool they it almost always comes to them by just nature. I got from your paragraph that cool people are trend setters and rarely followers, with their own form of uniqueness and I totally agree with you on that.
ReplyDeleteHi! I think that your essay will be easier to understand if you add more coherence; in other words, transitional word such as moreover or in addition. Furthermore, I do not understand why you use both the pronouns "they" and "we". It is a bit confusing to me because I do not know if this is about you or cool people, unless you consider yourself as cool. In that case, you might want to write the whole paragraph at the first person. Apart of that, this is a great paragraph, and you have it well detailed.
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